My first attempt at writing a poem....hope its gud...do comment....
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If
……you want to cry and you have no one to fall back on
……you want to reach work early and your train is late
……you want to leave work early and your boss asks you to stay late
……you have to part with something and you don’t want to give it away
……you are forced to take something and you don't desire it anyway
……you want to find the love of your life and can’t find one
……you want to be rich but can’t find an easy way to be one
……you are single and it’s Valentines Day
……it’s your birthday party and you’re still lonely
……you can’t understand the mystery life is
Jus smile and look above thinking of the word “Destiny”and all your IF's go away
Confused
Which way to go....
About Me
- Suraj
- Looking to make some good friends and use the blog to vent my feelings.Opinions and feedback always respected and appreciated. Work in the financial services sector.
At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet;Plato had said. I think whatever you write, if it comes straightly from your heart, it becomes a beautiful poem. If it was your first attempt, then you have done an excellent job. keep it up.
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